Just make the few changes I suggested and your letter will be perfect!
只要改動(dòng)我提到的個(gè)別地方,你的信就會(huì)很完美了。
The common meeting place for Maori is on the marae, an area of land with a meeting house, where all the important events take place.
毛利人的公眾集會(huì)是在集會(huì)地舉行,這是一個(gè)擁有會(huì)議廳的活動(dòng)場(chǎng)所,所有的重要活動(dòng)都在這里舉行。